Uwah! Haven't updated this blog in forever~
It's pretty lonely anyway.
Just as an interlude for a long post about something from the past, I'll offer a bit of info on what's been going on around me currently.
At this very moment, I'm using Kak Su's laptop to get online.
This is due to hardware problems concerning the DC wire of my laptop. No one here shares the same DC wire type as I do so I am unable to charge it; let alone turn it on.
I am planning to get this fixed as I feel at an extreme lost without Taimu-san.
Tomorrow, I feverishly hope that the weather would be good and Rieya-chan would be fit enough to accompany yours sincerely to Low Yatt.
It's going to cost a bit of something.
Current issues aside,
I'm getting to the main topic here. Please bear with me~
During my brief return to home, I had managed to dig up an old comic I did while I was in high school. The fact that my drawing has changed and improved to a certain degree never fail to amuse me.
I am pretty sure very little now about the comic and even less still scarcely remember about it.
As plain as it was, the title of the story was "Special Child"
It was one of the three on-going stories that I did in my highschool years - the other two being a comic entitled "Elements Guardian" and the other a gaanaru doujin that I don't think I've ever properly given a title.
Special Child was as special to me as the name I had given it.
I first started drawing it when I was 15 if I wasn't mistaken and I had aligned grandeur ideas and plots for the story while it was in the making.
I was naive, amateur, thoughtless and selfish when I did it. I admit with no shame.
It moved too fast, there were too many plot-holes, the lead had a Mary-Sue tendency and by the second chapter, I grew anxious because it had begun to stray from the actual storyline.
Therefore, even with Shiro-kun pressing me to continue, I gave up.
Finding it back now, I can see some good points I had achieved when I did it.
For one, I had created a world of my own. A magic dimension - but a world nonetheless. It had its own science fiction and probably only needed a few more strings to pull it together.
Another thing that I can't seem to give up on being entirely awed was the characters I had set up for the story. As I had mentioned, I was naive when I started Special Child and probably should have known better but even then, and more so now, I had bestowed upon them a personality of varying degrees. I had also scripted their history and arranged their timeline to the best of my abilities. I gave them different views, conflicting sometimes, so that I had hoped people will be open to more outlooks and thoughts.
It amazed me how far I had thought just for the story - now that I'm looking back.
Special Child was something I had put a lot of effort in despite it being the last to come into existent out of the other 2.
As for the plot, it wasn't something I could be proud of, sadly.
I believe it needed more story and arrangement. It needed a proper setting and introduction. I had probably also lay off on the fanservice if it could even be called that.
I should also focus a bit more heavily on the background and the detail. Not to mention the action was scarce and the scenes jump a lot.
It needs work but it's not Game Over yet.
Just a main idea about the concept of the story:
The story centers around Yuri but there are insights on the background of other characters.
Personality-wise,
Tsubaki Yuri is carefree, naive, gullible, kind-hearted, curious and some. She isn't physically strong and her magical abilities aren't trained well. She has the beginnings of a Mary Sue but I'm trying to develop her to be a bit conservative and deprived. What do you expect from being raised by men?
Musashi Suzume, or his real name Tsubaki Suzume, is the oldest of the three. As his name appears, he is actually Yuri's father. Due to many circumstances, he is a secretive person yet outwardly he can appear friendly, cheerful, positive and motivated. He was placed under a curse that traps his aging soul into a slow-aging body. He does come off sounding like a Gary Sue but he has his own set of dark characteristics and past that unravel throughout the story.
Hatake Tsubame is a no-nonsense type of guy and can probably work the sword better than a kitchen knife. He is loyal, strict, hardworking and dependable. He gets flustered easily when it comes to Yuri but as things are, everything is platonic. He is a good friend of Suzume but sometimes he just can't fathom what's going in Suzume's mind. That might be the fact that he can't really tolerate people who beat around the bush.
Hatake Uguisu is Tsubame's talented nephew. Not much of a genius but he's got talent when it comes to magic and fighting. He was the last to be recruited into the team and is learning magic from Suzume. He can be quite the prankster, having taken it from his father. Unknown to him, he is the product of a Special Child that was once also under the care of Suzume. That is why he's different from the other Fusekie's. He loves adventure and excitement but knows not to cross the line.
As for the antagonists...
I actually never got around to sketching the big boss but I did do a few.
Hikito Shoumi, whose original name was a cross between a DBZ character and an electrical appliance brand, is probably the most misunderstood creature to walk the earth. He is not evil per se but circumstances leave him with very little choice. He is family-oriented, caring, worry-wart and disorganized. He is Uguisu's childhood friend.
Hikito Nagiri is a man trapped inside a woman's body because of his own stupidity. He is Shoumi's younger brother with a bad temper. In a bout of rage, he had murdered their parents which in turned forced them to flee from their hometown. He is brash, street-smart, opportunist and slick. Because of him, Shoumi is forced to mingle with the darker side of the world.
Hikito Ryuhashi is the illegitimate child of Shoumi and Hatake Kurauchi, Uguisu's older sister. Terrified and shameful, Kurauchi wanted nothing to do with the child and had dumped all the responsibility on Shoumi. Closely after the birth of Ryuhashi, they had to run from the village. Despite living in difficult conditions, having to move around, Ryuhashi is surprisingly sheltered. He is timid, shy, gullible and can be quite childish.
Well, I've renewed their character sketch to keep my current style. When I can, I'll put it up here or on DA.
.
.
.
.
I think I'll be quite occupied for a bit~
It's pretty lonely anyway.
Just as an interlude for a long post about something from the past, I'll offer a bit of info on what's been going on around me currently.
At this very moment, I'm using Kak Su's laptop to get online.
This is due to hardware problems concerning the DC wire of my laptop. No one here shares the same DC wire type as I do so I am unable to charge it; let alone turn it on.
I am planning to get this fixed as I feel at an extreme lost without Taimu-san.
Tomorrow, I feverishly hope that the weather would be good and Rieya-chan would be fit enough to accompany yours sincerely to Low Yatt.
It's going to cost a bit of something.
Current issues aside,
I'm getting to the main topic here. Please bear with me~
During my brief return to home, I had managed to dig up an old comic I did while I was in high school. The fact that my drawing has changed and improved to a certain degree never fail to amuse me.
I am pretty sure very little now about the comic and even less still scarcely remember about it.
As plain as it was, the title of the story was "Special Child"
It was one of the three on-going stories that I did in my highschool years - the other two being a comic entitled "Elements Guardian" and the other a gaanaru doujin that I don't think I've ever properly given a title.
Special Child was as special to me as the name I had given it.
I first started drawing it when I was 15 if I wasn't mistaken and I had aligned grandeur ideas and plots for the story while it was in the making.
I was naive, amateur, thoughtless and selfish when I did it. I admit with no shame.
It moved too fast, there were too many plot-holes, the lead had a Mary-Sue tendency and by the second chapter, I grew anxious because it had begun to stray from the actual storyline.
Therefore, even with Shiro-kun pressing me to continue, I gave up.
Finding it back now, I can see some good points I had achieved when I did it.
For one, I had created a world of my own. A magic dimension - but a world nonetheless. It had its own science fiction and probably only needed a few more strings to pull it together.
Another thing that I can't seem to give up on being entirely awed was the characters I had set up for the story. As I had mentioned, I was naive when I started Special Child and probably should have known better but even then, and more so now, I had bestowed upon them a personality of varying degrees. I had also scripted their history and arranged their timeline to the best of my abilities. I gave them different views, conflicting sometimes, so that I had hoped people will be open to more outlooks and thoughts.
It amazed me how far I had thought just for the story - now that I'm looking back.
Special Child was something I had put a lot of effort in despite it being the last to come into existent out of the other 2.
As for the plot, it wasn't something I could be proud of, sadly.
I believe it needed more story and arrangement. It needed a proper setting and introduction. I had probably also lay off on the fanservice if it could even be called that.
I should also focus a bit more heavily on the background and the detail. Not to mention the action was scarce and the scenes jump a lot.
It needs work but it's not Game Over yet.
Just a main idea about the concept of the story:
Tsubaki Yuri is the illegitimate child of a Hanarie-born mother and Fusekie-origin father - Hanarie and Fusekie here would mean two types of living forces. She is the fourth 'Special Child' born and it is said that Special Child's can give birth to powerful offspring. However, this cannot be achieved without the consent of said Special Child. At least not until she turns the Hanarie adult age of 20-years-old.
And that's where her three bodyguards come in: Suzume, Tsubaki and Uguisu.
All three names are japanese words for certain types of birds
They have an oath from both Fusekie and Hanarie kingdoms to protect the child from people who wants to misuse her ability.
The story centers around Yuri but there are insights on the background of other characters.
Personality-wise,
Tsubaki Yuri is carefree, naive, gullible, kind-hearted, curious and some. She isn't physically strong and her magical abilities aren't trained well. She has the beginnings of a Mary Sue but I'm trying to develop her to be a bit conservative and deprived. What do you expect from being raised by men?
Musashi Suzume, or his real name Tsubaki Suzume, is the oldest of the three. As his name appears, he is actually Yuri's father. Due to many circumstances, he is a secretive person yet outwardly he can appear friendly, cheerful, positive and motivated. He was placed under a curse that traps his aging soul into a slow-aging body. He does come off sounding like a Gary Sue but he has his own set of dark characteristics and past that unravel throughout the story.
Hatake Tsubame is a no-nonsense type of guy and can probably work the sword better than a kitchen knife. He is loyal, strict, hardworking and dependable. He gets flustered easily when it comes to Yuri but as things are, everything is platonic. He is a good friend of Suzume but sometimes he just can't fathom what's going in Suzume's mind. That might be the fact that he can't really tolerate people who beat around the bush.
Hatake Uguisu is Tsubame's talented nephew. Not much of a genius but he's got talent when it comes to magic and fighting. He was the last to be recruited into the team and is learning magic from Suzume. He can be quite the prankster, having taken it from his father. Unknown to him, he is the product of a Special Child that was once also under the care of Suzume. That is why he's different from the other Fusekie's. He loves adventure and excitement but knows not to cross the line.
As for the antagonists...
I actually never got around to sketching the big boss but I did do a few.
Hikito Shoumi, whose original name was a cross between a DBZ character and an electrical appliance brand, is probably the most misunderstood creature to walk the earth. He is not evil per se but circumstances leave him with very little choice. He is family-oriented, caring, worry-wart and disorganized. He is Uguisu's childhood friend.
Hikito Nagiri is a man trapped inside a woman's body because of his own stupidity. He is Shoumi's younger brother with a bad temper. In a bout of rage, he had murdered their parents which in turned forced them to flee from their hometown. He is brash, street-smart, opportunist and slick. Because of him, Shoumi is forced to mingle with the darker side of the world.
Hikito Ryuhashi is the illegitimate child of Shoumi and Hatake Kurauchi, Uguisu's older sister. Terrified and shameful, Kurauchi wanted nothing to do with the child and had dumped all the responsibility on Shoumi. Closely after the birth of Ryuhashi, they had to run from the village. Despite living in difficult conditions, having to move around, Ryuhashi is surprisingly sheltered. He is timid, shy, gullible and can be quite childish.
Well, I've renewed their character sketch to keep my current style. When I can, I'll put it up here or on DA.
.
.
.
.
I think I'll be quite occupied for a bit~
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